Opinion

I have just published my first book of poems and would really appreciate some honest and constructive comment/opinion. I believe that if you go to the link you may download a copy of the book free as part of smash words sampling process. Little bit about me; Scottish mother and soldier father. Before I was eight I was on my sixth school. Reading from an early age, books which were probably to old for me :) Writing in my head all my life, put some on paper but no confidence. Lived in Stoke on Trent for over a decade because I went there as a mature student and got my degree in continental philosophy. Whilst there I was encouraged to take part in open mike poetry performances and from the response gained enough confidence to publish. I thank in advance any of you that take the time to read and give me an opinion. :) Here is the link https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/93285